Tuesday, June 29, 2010

parking lot narrative

this blog is good, its helping me write. and when i'm not writing, i'm thinking of ways i could write something.

example/ i wrote this on my phone, waiting for my sister because i was too lazy and unkept to leave the car

people come and go.
i stay, i watch.
they withstand the rittling and rattling of the shards of metal on wheels that is a shopping cart. they load up their bags and leave a trail of carbon emissions in their wake.

i, adjacent to a tree where black crows observe the same phenomena, watch.
they search for food.
i sit in the walmart parking lot and look out, watching the people coming and going.

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